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Post by Icefire on Mar 30, 2010 7:00:16 GMT -5
The darkness inside it rages The darkness inside it grows The darkness inside it consumes More than i could ever know
Lost in the darkness forever Stranded in a sea of pain As despair churns inside I cry out in vain
Noone hears my plea Noone hears my call They all don't care As i begin to fall
As i give in to the darkness As i sink into its depths My soul is filled with hate And the sound of laughter echoes As they laugh i vow to make them suffer I vow to make them suffer the same fate
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emma
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Post by emma on Mar 30, 2010 7:19:53 GMT -5
Icefire, I really loved that poem. You're an awesome writter and I hope to see some more poems from you
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Post by Icefire on Mar 30, 2010 7:32:41 GMT -5
haha kewl emma This is actually the 1st one ive ever posted in a forum.... So its kewl 2 see u liked it!!
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emma
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Post by emma on Mar 30, 2010 8:07:17 GMT -5
I knew you were going to be good at poetry too, just from all the times I've talked to you.. there is so much that you hide from people and it's good to see a poem. You are awesome Keep up the dark poems!!
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