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Post by Icefire on Apr 14, 2010 21:30:34 GMT -5
-This poem is about one of my oldest nightmares that i can remember-
I'm in a house so strange Like my house but twisted I walk down a dark hall Following a pained call I go out the back door Footsteps on the cement I turn and see nothing in sight Except a pair of boots black as night They are walking towards me But the worst part is They are completely empty
I turn and run Into a dark forest With no light , no sun Just a creepy mist Then out of the swamp Rises a huge black fist It reaches to grab me I am running again Will this ever end? Now there is a road that does not bend An empty car sets nearby I get in the car and start to drive
I don't drive far when i feel a huge bump What's on the road? Am i driving thru a dump? Then more follow the first So i set up to see And as i look out closely I take in shapes on the road Way too big to be any kind of toad They are human bodies Dead and rotting And i am driving over them Now the world starts to grow dim....
-That's when i wake up-
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emma
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Post by emma on Apr 15, 2010 5:38:45 GMT -5
ooooooooooooo awesome i love how you did that.. -thats when i wake up- thing awesome
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Post by Eve on Apr 15, 2010 11:05:33 GMT -5
wow pip........ that sounds like a scary dream!! very twisted!" lol just like you, You wrote this poem amazingly......... ur gifted dont stop
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